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Title: Choreography
Author: amejisuto
Theme: #3- Passion
Rating: R
Pairing: Spike/Xander/Anya
Fandom: Buffy tVS
Word Count: 571
Disclaimer:Not mine, never will be. No harm, no foul, no money made.
Summary: The threesome's second attempt at the sex.
Posted at: Written for stagesoflove and posted at my live journal and bloodclaim.
Previous parts can be found here.
Beta'd by the wonderful kitty_poker1. Thanks so much darlin!
Notes: It's actually a wee bit of smut, so there isn't much to say!




Choreography



Anya sat in one of the chairs in the motel room they were using, watching as Spike attempted to kiss Xander into unconsciousness. Either that or the vampire was looking for fillings, but Anya figured it was the first. They really did make a beautiful picture, Spike's lean frame compared to Xander's more bulky one. It was like seeing sunlight and moonlight or chocolate and vanilla and Anya shook her head to rid herself of that image. She'd been hanging around Xander too long if she was down to making similes with foodstuffs.

But would that make her caramel or strawberry? Considering the rinse she'd used the week before, perhaps strawberry would be best.

This was their second attempt at having group sex. The first, two weeks before, had been a disaster. For one thing, Xander's parents had started fighting in the middle of it, throwing the youngest into a tizzy. And looking back at it, Xander had been nervous before that. Anya figured it must have been the diagrams she'd drawn with instructions and illustrations.

Anya could admit that, while someone needed to be in charge to make sure everyone got off, perhaps having bullet points and a printed-out outline had been too much stress.

This attempt was going much better. For one thing, they'd rented a room for the weekend so there was no rush and no Harrises fighting overhead. Anya had also made sure that she and Xander went on patrol with Spike over the last two weeks, giving the boys more time to feel comfortable with each other so that Xander wouldn't be so nervous.

The three-way make out sessions probably helped as well.

Now she got to watch as Spike pinned Xander to the middle of the king sized bed. Not that Xander was complaining. In fact, Xander had his large hand on Spike's ass, pulling him closer. From where she was sitting, Anya could see the evidence of both men's arousal and the sounds of their passion made her squirm in place.

Over the past few weeks, she'd discovered that she liked watching. A lot.

Watching was good, however participating was better.

Anya got up from where she was sitting and joined the men on the bed. Their kissing didn't stop, but one of Xander's hands moved from Spike's ass to her inner thigh and moved upward. Anya could feel her breath quicken and she reached out with one hand to stroke both Spike’s and Xander's cocks at once.

Suddenly they broke their kiss off and two pairs of lust filled eyes were focused on her, making her blood rush. Spike's eyes were more gold than blue and she knew for a fact he could smell her excitement.

Both men were thrusting into her grip as she stroked them and Spike growled. “You know, Xan, she keeps on getting the upper hand on us. Think we should retaliate?”

“I think what's good for the goose is good for the ganders.” Xander gave that smile that had nothing of the self-conscious boy he'd been and all of the confident man he was becoming as his hand wandered up to the junction of her thighs. When she gasped, Spike used that as an opportunity to chase her tongue with his own.

Anya's last truly coherent thought was that perhaps it would do the men good to take over for a change.

Just until morning.

Comments

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batmanvinnie
Apr. 10th, 2006 04:46 pm (UTC)
LOL

Truly hilarious, hot, and joyous. Very nice.
Anya could admit that, while someone needed to be in charge to make sure everyone got off, perhaps having bullet points and a printed-out outline had been too much stress.
You always give me teh joy.
amejisuto
Apr. 10th, 2006 05:43 pm (UTC)
Awww. Thanks darlin! Glad you like!

Actually I can see Anya doing a PowerPoint presentation. LOL
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amejisuto
Apr. 10th, 2006 06:32 pm (UTC)
Glad you like darlin!

I dunno, there are three parts so far. Check my tags. My brain isn't working well today.
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sablerose2
Apr. 10th, 2006 07:28 pm (UTC)
Oh dear gods you better be writing more right now!!!! Love this need more please!!!! Thank you
amejisuto
Apr. 10th, 2006 07:29 pm (UTC)
YAY! You liked it! Thank you! And there are two more parts to go!
blue_icy_rose
Apr. 10th, 2006 08:26 pm (UTC)
*snort* Leave it to Anya to do a printed outline! This was just great...not to mention the hotness factor. *nods* Oh yeah. Definitely pretty. Lucky, lucky Anya.

Anya sat in one of the chairs in the motel room they were using, watching as Spike attempted to kiss Xander into unconsciousness. Either that or the vampire was looking for fillings, but Anya figured it was the first.

Those have to be two of the greatest opening lines ever! Just felt like mentioning that. And loved her thoughts on if she'd be caramel or strawberry. LOL.

And now I can't wait until next week for the next stage! ^_^
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:31 am (UTC)
Wow. Thank you so much! I'm all blushing. I had a hard time getting started believe it or not.

And you found it hot! YAY! So glad you liked it!
writan_bur
Apr. 10th, 2006 09:34 pm (UTC)
hmmmmmmmm Lovely images there!

*giggles at the men taking charge*

More, please? *puppy eyes*
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:31 am (UTC)
AWW! Not the puppy eyes!!

There will be more. Really. I've got two more stages to write.
piratepurple
Apr. 10th, 2006 09:39 pm (UTC)
hee! I love this story. Your Anya voice makes me cry with envy. :)
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:45 am (UTC)
Aww! Thank you! I'm all blushing. Glad you like her!
(Anonymous)
Apr. 10th, 2006 09:47 pm (UTC)
Oh God this was hilarious. That's definitely something I can imagine Anya doing, a full presentation with bullet points, an outline, and fully instructional diagrams. Oh, and like any good presentation it probably included a list of objectives in there. Number 1 being: Orgasms, and plenty of them!
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:48 am (UTC)
Hee! Yep, Anya had a all planned out. Timed probably too. Thanks for the great review, so glad you liked!
darkhavens
Apr. 10th, 2006 10:07 pm (UTC)
heee! I would love to watch through Anya's eyes. And give directions. *g*

Adorable!
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:49 am (UTC)
Thanks luv! I'm trying to make Anya's pov sort of who us slashers would think about the boys. Glad you like!
suki_blue
Apr. 11th, 2006 04:30 am (UTC)
That is so bloody hot!! Wow, I never would have thought Anya in the mix would be such a turn on. And you have Anya down, hon. Perfection!
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:52 am (UTC)
Thanks so much luv! I'm so glad you like my Anya! And you know all of us slashers are putting ourselves into Anya's shoes. Hee!
texanfan
Apr. 11th, 2006 05:46 am (UTC)
Yum. Looks like Anya has the boys well in hand. *heh* Diagrams *snerk*
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:55 am (UTC)
Yep, she's got a handle on the guys all right! LOL Thanks for reading, so glad you like!
tonicat
Apr. 11th, 2006 05:59 am (UTC)
Anya seems to have won the jackpot here..
*Is green with envy*
I want my Spander threesome too!

*Snerk* Diagrams? Maybe a bit overboard...
Unless they were hot... Were they hot?

*Smooch*
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:57 am (UTC)
I can't help but think Anya used stick figures for some reason. That's just in my head. LOL And who wouldn't want a threesome with Spike and Xander?

Thanks so much for the lovely comments, glad you like!
kitty_poker1
Apr. 11th, 2006 08:53 am (UTC)
I wanna be Anya, for just one night. Whaaa! Can I? *checks diagram-drawing skills*

Hot and adorable, love. Your Anya voice never once hits a false note.

MWAH!
amejisuto
Apr. 11th, 2006 09:01 am (UTC)
You sure can sweetie! In your head at least. LOL

Thank you so much for saying so love. I'm glad you like my Anya, you know how I worried about her.

HUGGLES!
lunabee34
Apr. 18th, 2006 11:56 am (UTC)
yay!!!! I'm loving this. For once, a fic about threesomes that acknowledges that three people probably don't fall into bed as gracefully and smoothly as porn would have us imagine. Well done.
amejisuto
Apr. 18th, 2006 05:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much darlin! Yeah, I just couldn't see everything going perfectly for the threesome that first time. So glad you liked!
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